I really like this, like your skills with dem 'lectronics are improving like mad. I think maybe you should try layering another kick in, messing with the envelope of the one you already have to add more attack and a slower decay with a sharp treble heavy transient.
Big plus I had with this beat was just how minimal it really was though. All the music was just so, not pretentious but just right. The synth work wasn't overly complex, but very just so. Best example of that is the (sawtooth) pad you had the echo on. And like I said before, the hi-hat was freaking lovely.
Very nice stuff bro! I'm really interested to hear your gritty sound keep developing.
Mucho gracias Ax, very nice to get a detailed review. I'm so damn lazy with kicks haha fml. Thanks a ton for the kind words. Ill consider putting some more punch on the kick next time lmao
I'm actually with Fats on that Phonix is spitting well, at least the flow on the first verse, but the (verb? or is it just a bad recording with compression?) on the first verse is erm. Interesting. Still, credit where it's due, guy had some decent lines. Guy will be a great, probably with more time on the battle scene (honestly hopes he's in clabtrap proper). That said, Phonix, work on the number of punch ins you use, your mixing, and the amount of filler (the 1st verse was wayyyy too fillerish for me).
Byron shone on this track I think, his flow game was greaaaat, lyrics very focused on personals and content. I think Byron won, despite being out-schemed, just because he stayed funny, flowsy and consistent.
Byron FTW, but Phonix shouldn't be disheartened.
Lol kk battelsll b fun
And you are...?
okay 1st impreshuns gd beat first guy sounds lik som white nerd gd rymes tho demigod ref = + points. secon guy soundz witer and nerdyr okwerd ryms 0 swag. 3rd guy sounz realer, gd shit suits de beat betta 4th guy sounz like secon guy lol whut. cant speak british lol but guy soundz ok dunno can't make his shit out 2 starz
okay 1st impreshuns ur gay
Fuckin wow... Laffin too hard whuts clabtrap
Annual Newgrounds rap battle. Lots of fun.
Shiiiiiiiiiittttttttt this is good mang
1st guy got a real flow beat pretty soft and mice quality could be better but 1st guy keeps it real so its all gd 2nd guy was wel... dry.... nd whit lol very whit took the avrage
OK 1st impreshuns n***a goes hard. 1st vers doep flow real lyrix go off beat once or twise still dope. 2nd dude nt bad doesn't feel as smooth as 1st dude, sounds pree white lol outro gos hard gd shit
thanks bro.. funny cause the second guy is half black.... haha
YESSS n***a pls this shitd blow clubs get bitches up on ERRYBODY evn tha nerdz LOL
OKAY 1st guy not 2 shabbi sum linez pree wack but 2ond guy KILLT IT.
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